求職信中去掉所有個人猜測“意見”,,改成肯定語句。比如說,,“I’m confident my communication skills would make me a strong Project Manager(我相信我的溝通技巧會使我成為一個好的項目經(jīng)理)” 改成 “My communication skills would make me a strong Project Manager(我的溝通技巧將使我成為一個好的項目經(jīng)理)”,。
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2. “Good”
不是說good不好,求職信總是要盡可能滴多夸獎自己嘛,!不過,,如果整篇求職信中都是“a good XXer” 或 “good at doing sth”的字樣,不但看起來枯燥,,也顯得寫信人并沒有誠意十足地在寫這封求職信,。
如何修正?
嘗試用這些形容詞替換:
Skilled
Talented
Experienced
Accomplished
Expert
Able
Successful
Apt
Seasoned
Thorough
Capable
Competent
Efficient
3. “This Job Would Help Me Because…(這份工作能幫我是因為……)”
“My four years of experience with open-source Java, HTML5, and CSS3, combined with my passion for building responsive web applications, would allow me to create elegant, maintainable, and functional front-end code—and ultimately make Panther’s products even more user-friendly than they already are(四年的編寫Java、HTML5和CSS3經(jīng)驗,,結(jié)合我對Web應(yīng)用程序的熱情,,讓我能創(chuàng)造出優(yōu)秀的前端代碼,并能使客戶的產(chǎn)品比現(xiàn)在更人性化),�,!�